Report Card

Remarks for English Language

You have a lot of talent in expressing your ideas. You display an understanding of purpose, awareness of situation and audience. You should strive to reach your full potential and pursue the development of your reading skills.

You are a creative writer and your compositions are clear, organized, and interesting to read, showing evidence of planning. However, you need to focus on development of reading skills, decoding the given information to answer implicit meaning questions accurately.

You have a flair for writing and your compositions often have a refreshing sense of voice, clarity, and style. Moreover, in directed writing, all required points are developed in detail, fully amplified and well organised. Improvement in reading skills will help facilitate appropriate extraction of information.

You put a great deal of time and effort into your writing. However for further improvement in classroom situation, you should listen attentively and respond well to a series of instructions. Moreover, you need to develop reading habit to enrich your vocabulary.

You organise your writing well, but need to add more details to your work.  The vocabulary you use conveys meaning but likely to be simple and imprecise. Exposure to a variety of reading material will help to develop reading and writing skills.

You express your ideas clearly and effectively yet your vocabulary conveys meaning that is simple and imprecise. Diligent effort should be made to produce a wide range of writing. Reading a variety of books will help you to develop written and reading skills further.

You make a genuine effort to write for different purposes, and your writing style is becoming clearer and more organised. You can enhance your skills further by paying more attention to details and reading varied range of books.

You are a creative writer and express ideas clearly, both verbally and through writing. You should use wide vocabulary and sentence structure; generate neat and careful work and avoid errors through attention to detail.

You are a creative writer. Your paragraphs have coherence and show evidence of planning. More over, the tone and register of directed writing is entirely appropriate. Reading a variety of books will help you to develop wide range of vocabulary and sentence structures.

You have a lot of potential and are a budding author. Your essays have well-developed images helping to create complex atmospheres yet you need to strive harder as all content points should be developed in detail, fully amplified and well organised.

You have a flair for writing yet your vocabulary is simple and imprecise. You should use wide vocabulary and sentence structure; generate neat and careful work and avoid errors through attention to detail.

You put a great deal of time and effort into your writing. However, for further improvement in classroom situation, you should listen attentively and respond well to a series of instructions. Moreover, you need to develop reading habit to enrich your vocabulary.

You have a talent for writing and your compositions often have a revitalizing sense of voice, clarity, and style. You can excel by paying more attention to details and reading varied range of books.

You have a lot of talent in expressing your ideas; display an understanding of purpose, awareness of situation and audience. You should strive to reach your full potential and pursue the development of your reading skills.

You are a creative writer and your compositions are clear and interesting to read, yet you should develop organisational skills, showing the evidence of planning. You also need to focus on improvement of reading skills to decode the given information and answer implicit meaning questions accurately.

You exhibit a positive outlook and attitude in the classroom and are a budding author. I find your work very interesting and neat. Exposure to a variety of reading material will help to develop wide vocabulary and reading skills further.

You have a lot of talent in expressing your ideas; display an understanding of purpose, awareness of situation and audience. You should strive to reach your full potential and pursue the development of your reading skills.

You put a great deal of time and effort into your writing. However, error in verb form and tenses usually affect the flow of writing. Moreover, you need to develop reading habit to enrich your vocabulary.

You express ideas clearly, both verbally and through writing. You can excel by paying more attention to details and descriptions in your writing, using wider vocabulary and variety of sentence structure and reading varied range of books.

You make a genuine effort to write for different purposes, and your writing style is becoming clearer and more organised. You can enhance your skills further by paying more attention to details and reading varied range of books.

You have a flair for writing and your compositions often have a refreshing sense of voice, clarity, and style. Moreover, in directed writing, all required points are developed and well organised. Improvement of reading skills will help you to extract information correctly.

You express your ideas clearly and effectively yet your vocabulary conveys meaning that is simple and imprecise. Diligent effort should be made to produce a wide range of writing. Reading a variety of books will help you to develop written and reading skills further.

You put a great deal of time and effort into your writing. However, for further improvement, in the classroom situation, you should listen attentively and respond well to a series of instructions. Moreover, you need to develop reading habit to enrich your vocabulary.

You organise your writing well, but need to add more details to your work.  The vocabulary you use is simple and imprecise. Exposure to a variety of reading material will help to develop reading and writing skills.

You express ideas clearly, both verbally and through writing. You can excel by paying more attention to details and descriptions in your writing. Wider vocabulary and variety of sentence structure and increasing the range of reading books will improve your written expression further.

An Unfinished Roundabout

Thursday 2nd February 2012 | Rabi-ul-Awwal 9, 1433

THE Ziauddin roundabout in Karachi’s North Nazimabad, which has been under construction for the last six or so months, seems to have been dug for ages, and the work in progress is being carried out at a snail’s pace.

It is important to mention here that in addition to a hospital and a medical college, there are numerous schools in the vicinity of this roundabout. And, above all, it is a densely populated area. One can imagine chaos in the morning when everyone is rushing to reach schools, college and hospital on time, struggling through the jampacked road, even driving on the wrong side.

Sometimes the haste gives rise to accidents and serious squabbles between commuters. Perhaps to save time, some of the bus drivers sometimes drop students on that buzzing and congested road which is too risky to be neglected. Amid honking horns, noise and air pollution patients in and around the hospital no doubt suffer a great deal.

In the light of all this, one strongly feels the authorities concerned need to take prompt action and resolve this matter by speeding up the ongoing work at the said roundabout so that many citizens passing through this area could reach their respective destinations on time and safely. Furthermore, patients coming to the area hospital too would recover quickly.

SAIMA ABEDI 
Karachi